DL#8 HW#2

I didn't really have unanswered question after reading either of the drafts. I liked Jessica's because her sources all covered different things. Some were biased and others were not which is good to get different perspectives. I also edited Oscar's draft. I liked how his sources all had facts. I was confused with Oscar's draft because he kept switched tenses. In one sentence he would have both pretense and past-tense words. Maybe he is having trouble with that. Jessica's draft had all the required information, but Oscar didn't explain how he would use all of the sources in his paper.